Erased
Dilute tears, in translucent
Curtains of thin thin red
Caves a pool, of memories,
Moments and a still-born.
“I won’t tell it belonged to you.”
Starry nights, but monochrome
Dreams of nude nude flesh
Guard a bed, with pillows,
Creases and a shameless sin.
“No these fingers don’t point at you.”
Cherry-eyed cakes, melted candles,
And a weary long long day,
Await a smile, less unborn,
More a guilt buried within.
“Be happy. Nothing happened.”
6 Comments:
Again state of mind?
~Voice
Its really a imaginative metaphor for your state of mind... I like the style you write as well.
Its appealing due to the uncanny nature of your mind.
Keep penning!
first time to ur blog.. enjoyed it ... interesting one !! keep it going..
Its just honest.....I respect it
Lovely poem!
The pain of aborted child and lost love.. is expressed soo beautifully!
Dilute tears, in translucent
Curtains of thin thin red
Caves a pool, of memories,
Moments and a still-born.
“I won’t tell it belonged to you.”
Couldntget past these lines for some time :)
u have got the magic :)
winnie,
i have had fights with somebody. i just couldn believe that person cudn understand it. but glad to know, it is not math or gibberish. thanks a lot. :)
archana
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